From 1d75c7976c5c8b636dbd37f36a83da471a60cd29 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mike Gabriel <mike.gabriel@das-netzwerkteam.de>
Date: Fri, 24 Mar 2017 18:11:28 +0100
Subject: impressive-display.tex: Minor grammar fixes.

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 data/impressive-display.tex | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

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diff --git a/data/impressive-display.tex b/data/impressive-display.tex
index 495e2b9..0ee97a0 100644
--- a/data/impressive-display.tex
+++ b/data/impressive-display.tex
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
     \begin{itemize}
     \item<alert@+| uncover@+->\textbf{Install a minimal} Debian (or derivative) \textbf{system without X11} / Graphical Login Manager
     \item<alert@+| uncover@+->Install Impressive Display and NoDM: \\ \small \texttt{apt-get install impressive-display nodm}
-    \item<alert@+| uncover@+->\textbf{Edit \texttt{/etc/default/nodm}}, set \texttt{NODM\_ENABLED=true} and \texttt{NODM\_USER=impressive-display}
+    \item<alert@+| uncover@+->\textbf{Edit \texttt{/etc/default/nodm}}, set \texttt{NODM\_ENABLED=true} and \texttt{NODM\_USER=impressive-display}. Create this user as a system user.
     \item<alert@+| uncover@+->\textbf{Check that \texttt{impressive-display} is the default X session manager}: \\ \small \texttt{update-alternatives \hbox{-}\hbox{-}config x-session-manager}
     \item<alert@+| uncover@+->\textbf{Start NoDM}: \small \texttt{sudo invoke-rc.d nodm start}
     \end{itemize}
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@
     \begin{itemize}
     \item<alert@+| uncover@+->Create a \textbf{minimal LTSP chroot}, uninstall or \textbf{disable the LTSP Display Manager} (aka LDM)
     \item<alert@+| uncover@+->\textbf{Make} the LTSP \textbf{chroot bootable over PXE}: the system should boot into a text-based logon screen
-    \item<alert@+| uncover@+->All LTSP \textbf{client systems must have a dedicated hostname} after PXE boot
+    \item<alert@+| uncover@+->All LTSP \textbf{client systems must have a dedicated hostnames} after PXE boot
     \item<alert@+| uncover@+->Apply \textbf{installation steps for standalone hosts to} the LTSP \textbf{chroot}
     \item<alert@+| uncover@+->\textbf{Set host-specific parameters} like PDF download URI, display resolution, etc. via the \texttt{\$\{DISPLAYS[@]\}} associative array, \textbf{for examples see:} \\ \small \texttt{/etc/default/impressive-display}
     \end{itemize}
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